I decided to go ahead and do away with every part that wasn't working. I'd rather it be shorter with good sequences versus longer with things that don't work. I think I should have gone longer and more on the very last part since it's a big collective sequence. I feel like maybe there should be some more editing involved, like cuts back and forth between certain sequences and maybe some repeats but I'm unsure of how exactly to go about doing that to make it intentional and visually interesting. I kept with the dumb, happy faces because I like that naive quality.
(PS. Vimeo is still not cooperating, which is why I uploaded it to Blogger.)
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