Essay Rework into Pitch:
Scene 1: A close-up of a horse's eye, the sounds of heavy breathing from the horse. Switch to close up of human's eye and human's breathing. Close-up of human's mouth.
Scene 2: The time-keep calls out the 1 minute countdown mark. You hear countdown, starting with hearing all the numbers to skipping to counting down in tens, illusion of things speeding up. While hearing countdown you see the rider and horse anxiously pacing.
Scene 3: When you hear "10" in the countdown, the audio slows down to countdown the final 10 seconds. You see quick cuts between the horse walking around the startbox, the rider close-up fumbling with the reins, the time-keeper looking at the watch, the time-keeper yelling out the count, the horse entering into the startbox, the final 5 numbers being counted down followed by a slow-motion take-off of the horse from the startbox.
Scene 4: A sudden speed up to a tracking shot of the horse galloping to the first fence, a shot of the horse jumping over the first fence from the underside. A series of quick cuts between open galloping, jumping over fences, closeups on the rider and horse all in many different shots varying in angle and space.
Scene 5: After the final fence, a slow-motion shot from behind of the horse galloping towards the finish line.
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